They are never balanced correctly, and frankly they really can’t be. Minigames are ALWAYS more of a pain in the ass then they ever will help to flesh out anything in your game. You need to effectively balance that point. Some won’t mind grinding, or working for a girl’s affections but there are degrees of patient most of us will put up with. That is predominantly what 99% of your audience will be here for. Take the constructive criticism as it stands, and recall this is a SEX GAME site. Again, if it’s for humor, it’s an overplayed joke by this point. Not all of us can afford to support every game on these sites we might enjoy… just because they exist.
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I do not care how many times you make the EA reference, you’re literally telling people that want to play for free to fuck right off. Who apparently can in cutscenes get EVERY question in a 500 page exam correct but you make the player go through minigames which are WAY too bloody fast by the way, and SHOULD be skippable with the assumption the MC wins. But that workaround reaches so far that it frankly would have been less of a PITA to just give him an awesome magical ability that he could build directly from to start with. After you break her into your sex doll You have a “colorless” mage who ISN’T colorless at all. Do you not? Guess what does not belong in Harem content – UNLESS it is the MC doing the NTR to another assholish male. You do understand you’re writing a freaking HAREM. With no bracketed clue that it’s NOT going to happen. You’ve got far too many instances of NTR potential, one of them being the fiancee herself, since you cannot avoid breaking the engagement whether you’d want to keep it or not – AND the only one who believes in you from the start you go off and force into a marriage. You set him to an engagement in general that apparently you never meant to be kept. Which makes it that much harder to believe he should be the MC. You’re also emasculating the main character FAR too frequently. I question your sense of humor if you disagree. For what A joke? Because not a freaking bit of that is funny.
There is the fact you started the male as an old man killed him off and put him in the body of another male who preferred non consent – just to kill him off twice. None of this is endearing, or generally very likely to gain you more subscribers in the long run. The “lucky” pervert trope is overused and again is more punishing to the audience than you should be going for.
The female should NEVER beat on the male lead. Though I’d argue the Kitsune being a Tsundere type are both Japanese cultural foci. The veitnamese cultural references are fine. This time I will try to not make things personal: So let me here try to summarize my actual thoughts. Which isn’t the best way to do any generalized review. Since for whatever reason I either didn’t post the original comment, or it was ousted I’ll say I typed both of the originals angrily.
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